Friday, 11 December 2015

Drafting and Planning:Peer Assessment of Remake Remodel Task

Recently, I have completed a Remake-Remodel Task. This allowed me to think of the codes and conventions of a magazine and put them into practice. I recreated an NME magazine as shown here:
http://joshvileasmedia.blogspot.com/2015/12/remodel-task.html

In class I received feedback from my peer as shown below:

What Went Well:
-The coverline was well presented on the left hand side and fit in with the magazine well.
-The masthead was clearly visible and two big which didn't take away from the coverstar.
-The quote from from the coverstar was funny as it created irony from Miley Cyrus. Who is known in the modern era for challenging the codes of conventions of daytime tv by not wearing that much clothing.

Even Better If:
-Barcode was bit to big, this could be deceived as me trying to make up space and show lack of understanding of the codes and conventions of magazine features.
-I believe there could of been more added for example a pug and a puff.

This feedback will allow me to develop a fine understanding of the codes and conventions of a magazine to incorporate into my actual magazine.

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