I have received feedback from my peers on my first draft. This draft wasn't the best in my opinion however my peers believe some aspects were good and that should keep them.
Front cover:
Through my feedback I realised that people really like the use of the erosion on the masthead as it create an edgy feel. They also like the use of the coverlines as they believe the content they possess fits in really well with the magazine genre itself. However the photography could be better in the sense of the resolution
Contents Page:
The contents page received the worst feedback as the layout wasn't good at all, the contents page also seemed very bare and didn't have much do it. This I can work on as the photography session is tomorrow.
Double Page: This received barely any criticism as the photography fit in with the theme of the magazine, the only feedback that I received was that the text wasn't visable and that I could potentially need a new photo to showcase my text a lot more.
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